Comments for Blue Zone Zyracuse

Comment on The Repercussions of Choices by Dave

Dave — Thu, 07 Jul 2011 04:02:18 +0000

After listening to this, I like the way this shows a more creepy side of Slater, who’s always been a Boy Scout of sorts and that Hookmime makes such a good guest appearance.

Comment on Breaking Point by Dave

Dave — Sat, 23 Apr 2011 03:05:14 +0000

Matt, I’m glad to see you’re bridging that gap. Perhaps they lost a bet.

Comment on Breaking Point by MattH

MattH — Wed, 20 Apr 2011 18:05:59 +0000

You are absolutely correct about the Sergeant designation difference and I will fix that as well. Gunny is more fun to say anyways. I took a break from this storyline to work on something else. I have the next installment written regarding how they get to Syracuse and why, but I never get time to sit down and fine tune it.

Comment on Breaking Point by MattH

MattH — Wed, 20 Apr 2011 18:00:22 +0000

Just did another read through and noticed a ton of errors that need to be corrected.

Comment on Breaking Point by Gray

Gray — Wed, 20 Apr 2011 14:26:56 +0000

This was a great short story, it was quite the pleasure to read. There is one thing I did want to bring to your attention though…you simply can’t call a Gunnery Sergeant of Marines a Sergeant. That is how it is done in the army, however the Marines do not stand for such a thing. I don’t mean to be nit-picky, I just wanted to let you know

Comment on March Madness by Dave

Dave — Sat, 19 Mar 2011 05:02:55 +0000

Brilliant, baby!

Comment on The Fall by JaYhEaD

JaYhEaD — Wed, 23 Feb 2011 00:32:53 +0000

Short and sweet? Loved this, Dave

Comment on :) by Dave

Dave — Tue, 25 Jan 2011 02:46:17 +0000

Gary Cheevers.

Comment on The Fall by Tyler

Tyler — Mon, 06 Dec 2010 11:13:07 +0000

Ha! That was great! Such a cynical sense of humor in the story; I love it! I needed a good laugh today…

Comment on The Fall by MattH

MattH — Sun, 07 Nov 2010 00:47:26 +0000

Just added leave raking and mulching to my chore list. Thanks Dave.