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Questions from K
We need to get more concrete details set down about the zone. I know one reason that I’ve been leery about writing more zone related stories is that there is too much up in the air right now. I think we have to make some decisions and stick with them. Have we really decided on…
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About FNG and Other Issues
I would have just posted a comment but wordpress wouldn’t let me. The story shows great improvements in terms of technical writing, you’ve made it flow a lot smoother, but I’m afraid that’s all the praise I can offer. In terms of character development it only serves to make the character even flatter than he…